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gowerboy
7/17/2008 9:53 am |
she had worked so hard for so long at being invisible that when she finally wanted to be seen she had to fill herself with darkness in order to reflect the light |
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 7/17/2008 10:32 am |
Is this some variation on the theme of the previous post? Works fantastically, either way. Unless you're describing one of those goth chicks. ~ Brian
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 7/17/2008 10:44 am |
It's like going to the dark side ...I like it!  "Never look back, the future is so close!" Angie
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7/17/2008 11:33 am |
You left me with something to ponder deeper. A riveting piece shared! I like it!
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7/17/2008 11:47 am |
maybe she was scared and only allowed heself to be seen again when you were ready Treat me with respect and I'll treat you the same 
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7/17/2008 12:32 pm |
The dark around me it instills a winter like numbing chill It delves into my deepest bones into places it has known A ripple rising through my spine fear and anger intertwine I raise my hand to kill the beast turn on the light to end it's feast If it weren't for smart alec remarks, I'd have no remarks at all.
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7/17/2008 12:52 pm |
I caught the reflection of a moon beam from her LONG, dark  . Her cast an intriguing shadow, I was pleased that I could NOT see her face. A Woman's from the BACK !
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7/17/2008 12:54 pm |
WOW...for a moment I had a vision of a giant black hole sucking everything in... have you been born with a pen in your hands?
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7/17/2008 3:18 pm |
basement cat iz a she? I'm dyslexic. I scream Ho Dog instead of Oh God in the throes of passion.
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7/17/2008 4:59 pm |
i have met her and shared with her even then she still goes back to the dark.... man mano thanks for inspiring thought 
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7/17/2008 8:06 pm |
You make darkness poetic, and that gives it grace. Cheers! 
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7/17/2008 8:25 pm |
Will you please stop writing about me? Just kidding, don't stop.
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7/18/2008 2:40 am |
Is this some variation on the theme of the previous post? Works fantastically, either way. Unless you're describing one of those goth chicks. ~ Brian
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7/18/2008 2:42 am |
It's like going to the dark side ...I like it!
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7/18/2008 2:43 am |
You left me with something to ponder deeper. A riveting piece shared! I like it!
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7/18/2008 2:43 am |
maybe she was scared and only allowed heself to be seen again when you were ready
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7/18/2008 2:46 am |
The dark around me it instills a winter like numbing chill It delves into my deepest bones into places it has known A ripple rising through my spine fear and anger intertwine I raise my hand to kill the beast turn on the light to end it's feast You might want to post it on Writers' Workshop.
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7/18/2008 2:48 am |
I caught the reflection of a moon beam from her LONG, dark . Her cast an intriguing shadow, I was pleased that I could NOT see her face.how I love you so especially in your nighty when the moonlight flits across your tits oh Jesus Christ Almighty! Dudley Moore
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7/18/2008 2:49 am |
WOW...for a moment I had a vision of a giant black hole sucking everything in... have you been born with a pen in your hands?
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7/18/2008 2:53 am |
basement cat iz a she?
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7/18/2008 2:54 am |
i have met her and shared with her even then she still goes back to the dark.... man mano thanks for inspiring thought Fantastic, hermanito. backly slugs n stuff
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7/18/2008 2:56 am |
You make darkness poetic, and that gives it grace. Oops, there goes the muse.
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7/18/2008 2:57 am |
Will you please stop writing about me? Just kidding, don't stop.
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7/18/2008 6:07 am |
Drink ink and we can "reflect the light". Hmmm, energy-saving.  Agnes
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7/18/2008 6:37 am |
basement cat will eets yur soul fer dat I'm dyslexic. I scream Ho Dog instead of Oh God in the throes of passion.
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7/18/2008 7:14 am |
Darkness has grace, and the ability to make us poo ourselves with fear. Oops, there goes the muse. Cheers!
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7/18/2008 11:44 am |
Good poetry.... FeleciaStar
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7/18/2008 3:42 pm |
da ceiling cat does not admit the presence of darkness between the stars, beyond the planet mars, there Sens will be
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7/18/2008 5:49 pm |
Deep thoughts....she had worked so hard for so long at being invisible Looking above at what you wrote, sometimes, I feel like that!! Hugs~ "I am many women in one, many things to many people but mostly I do what I do best...I'm just me..."
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7/19/2008 5:21 am |
You look like a beau ténébreux on your latest profile pic. I love it. PT
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7/19/2008 6:08 am |
Been there....done that.... Never Give Up Hope...Your Dreams Are Out There....
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7/19/2008 1:07 pm |
tell more about darkness reflecting light
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7/19/2008 7:36 pm |
Mickey was here!! Never take life seriously. No one ever gets out alive anyway.
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7/19/2008 8:03 pm |
Ouch. LK
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7/19/2008 11:45 pm |
Have a great Sunday thanks for reading and as per Dave Allen "May your God go with you"
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7/20/2008 2:07 pm |
Nice photo GB. how did you do it? someone on a tube and the street lights reflecting?? Or a double take? Just goes to show, working hard does not always get you noticed. Tone. 
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7/21/2008 4:49 am |
Drink ink and we can "reflect the light". Hmmm, energy-saving. And all the sea were ink And all the trees were bread and cheese What should we have for drink? Shel Silverstein (I think)
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7/21/2008 4:50 am |
plz to tell basement cat my soul haz no flavor, not good nommin nom
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7/21/2008 4:51 am |
I've never pooed myself with fear. And that's the truth.
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7/21/2008 4:51 am |
Good poetry....
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7/21/2008 4:53 am |
da ceiling cat does not admit the presence of darkness basements iz wer iz awl at
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7/21/2008 4:53 am |
Deep thoughts....she had worked so hard for so long at being invisible Looking above at what you wrote, sometimes, I feel like that!! Hugs~
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7/21/2008 4:57 am |
You look like a beau ténébreux on your latest profile pic. I love it. PT Thanks.
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7/21/2008 4:57 am |
Been there....done that....
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7/21/2008 5:14 am |
tell more about darkness reflecting light certain it was going to be you, too. Happily, I was right. If you are invisible, light passes through you. In order to be seen you must reflect light to some degree. If you reflect all light then you become a mirror. Most objects reflect some wavelengths of light and absorb others. This is how they are seen. Thus, a certain degree of opacity, or darkness, is necessary in order to be visible. Even black bodies emit certain wavelengths at certain temperatures. Or do you want the poetic explanation?
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7/21/2008 5:15 am |
Mickey was here!!
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7/21/2008 5:15 am |
Ouch. LK
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7/21/2008 5:16 am |
Have a great Sunday
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7/21/2008 5:19 am |
Nice photo GB. how did you do it? someone on a tube and the street lights reflecting?? Or a double take? Just goes to show, working hard does not always get you noticed. Tone. greenish image is the inside of the train carriage, while the lights are from the boatyards, reflected on the water of the bay.
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7/21/2008 6:15 am |
I thought you either had invisibility or you didn't. Now that I know it's an option... Peace .. elaine67
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7/21/2008 6:43 am |
Got the t-shirt?  Never Give Up Hope...Your Dreams Are Out There....
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7/21/2008 7:00 am |
Nope....topless actually...
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7/21/2008 7:48 am |
I thought you either had invisibility or you didn't. Now that I know it's an option...
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7/21/2008 7:56 am |
That reminds me, I left a light on upstairs. Lovely as always. Perfection Isn't Sexy
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7/21/2008 8:15 am |
Then........or now? Never Give Up Hope...Your Dreams Are Out There....
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7/21/2008 8:23 am |
That reminds me, I left a light on upstairs. Lovely as always. Thanks.
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7/21/2008 8:24 am |
Hmmm yesterday....
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7/21/2008 9:24 am |
basement cat have ketchup nom I'm dyslexic. I scream Ho Dog instead of Oh God in the throes of passion.
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7/21/2008 6:46 pm |
so.....who are she?haha~i like your imagination
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7/21/2008 7:29 pm |
I have already been bad lately by not visiting....so my friend: I send you sweet dreamz to protect you, and keep you safe through the night. Friends are one of the greatest treasures anyone could have and I'm glad to have you as my friend. Nighty Night and Sweet Dreamz (¨`·.·´¨) Always `·.¸(¨`·.·´¨) Keep (¨`·.·´¨)¸.·´ Smiling! `·.¸.·´(¨`·.·´¨) Always `·.¸(¨`·.·´¨) Be (¨`·.·´¨)¸.·´ You !! Hugsssss and Love...Ashera "I am many women in one, many things to many people but mostly I do what I do best...I'm just me..."
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7/21/2008 10:20 pm |
hmm see? another mind boggling post  luv to be invisible tho.. let me think and will get back at ya.. daphne JuSt An OrDiNaRy GiRl WiTh XtRa OrDiNaRy DrEaMs! 
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7/22/2008 1:57 am |
You're so imaginative again. This one sounds like a poetic description of diplomacy in action to me. Have a good week.
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7/22/2008 8:01 am |
hee hee, you tooks bait, now ceiling cat will gives you the runs
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7/22/2008 8:02 am |
so.....who are she?haha~i like your imagination Thanks and thanks for visiting.
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7/22/2008 8:03 am |
I have already been bad lately by not visiting....so my friend: I send you sweet dreamz to protect you, and keep you safe through the night. Friends are one of the greatest treasures anyone could have and I'm glad to have you as my friend. Nighty Night and Sweet Dreamz (¨`·.·´¨) Always `·.¸(¨`·.·´¨) Keep (¨`·.·´¨)¸.·´ Smiling! `·.¸.·´(¨`·.·´¨) Always `·.¸(¨`·.·´¨) Be (¨`·.·´¨)¸.·´ You !! Hugsssss and Love...Ashera Thanks.
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7/22/2008 8:04 am |
hmm see? another mind bogglingpost luv to be invisible tho.. let me think and will get back at ya.. daphne Thanks for dropping by.
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7/22/2008 8:05 am |
You're so imaginative again. This one sounds like a poetic description of diplomacy in action to me. Have a good week. Week could be better, so far.
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7/22/2008 6:44 pm |
Nindot! (¯`v´¯) `*.¸.*´ ¸.•´¸.•*¨) ¸.•*¨) (¸.•´ (¸.•´ .•´ ¸¸.•¨¯`•smile and be happy always
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7/23/2008 1:32 am |
Diplomacy in action? How so? Week could be better, so far. Bo Bennett said something really wonderful."Diplomacy is more than saying or doing the right things at the right time,it's avoiding saying or doing the wrong things at any time."(But you have another option,too: leaving them unsaid or undone at all.)Anyway,your light or dark side couldn't be hidden imao. ps:it would be interesting to know what thoughts&emotions made you write this poem(if it's not top-secret,of course!).
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7/23/2008 3:03 am |
Nindot! You're nice, too.
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7/23/2008 3:10 am |
Wellll,I just associated your poem with the microclimate of Blogland. I can't stand all those endless,egocentric,little wars(which usually lead to nowhere),that lack of tolerance&tact among adults. Bo Bennett said something really wonderful."Diplomacy is more than saying or doing the right things at the right time,it's avoiding saying or doing the wrong things at any time."(But you have another option,too: leaving them unsaid or undone at all.)Anyway,your light or dark side couldn't be hidden imao. ps:it would be interesting to know what thoughts&emotions made you write this poem(if it's not top-secret,of course!). "secrets" was written at the same time. Trying to fill the void is what motivates many people.
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7/23/2008 9:06 am |
Thanks for your sincere reply. So...Dudley's Flo can be an excellent diplomat then (even in her nighty).
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7/23/2008 10:19 am |
Thanks for your sincere reply. So...Dudley's Flo can be an excellent diplomat then (even in her nighty). (especially in her nightie)
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7/23/2008 10:49 am |
You seem to have an uncanny way of making women feel you're writing about them. I too related to the longing to be invisible and the subsequent desire not to be. Very satisfying reading your words. It's one of the things I come back here for.
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7/23/2008 11:28 am |
You seem to have an uncanny way of making women feel you're writing about them. I too related to the longing to be invisible and the subsequent desire not to be. Very satisfying reading your words. It's one of the things I come back here for. draw whatever conclusions you like from that. Other pieces were written about women, or combinations of women, directly. I think everyone wishes they could choose as and when to be invisible. I'm glad you keep coming back, flame.
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7/23/2008 6:51 pm |
Thanks, belle. You're nice, too.  (¯`v´¯) `*.¸.*´ ¸.•´¸.•*¨) ¸.•*¨) (¸.•´ (¸.•´ .•´ ¸¸.•¨¯`•smile and be happy always
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7/24/2008 3:27 am |
welcome
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7/26/2008 9:59 am |
As I was writing it, I knew someone would ask this and I was pretty certain it was going to be you, too. Happily, I was right. If you are invisible, light passes through you. In order to be seen you must reflect light to some degree. If you reflect all light then you become a mirror. Most objects reflect some wavelengths of light and absorb others. This is how they are seen. Thus, a certain degree of opacity, or darkness, is necessary in order to be visible. Even black bodies emit certain wavelengths at certain temperatures. Or do you want the poetic explanation? are those sand castles of our minds? I think I was looking for the poetic explanation, I thought in that area nothing good could come out of darkness ...
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7/28/2008 3:30 am |
very interesting this thing ... with the time we start guessing what others would say, even if we wouldn't recognize them at the streets. I enjoy the story you'd write about this topic, though you may not have started yet are those sand castles of our minds? I think I was looking for the poetic explanation, I thought in that area nothing good could come out of darkness ... The poetic explanation is always your own.
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