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a subdued art this, escaped from days of yore a vacant-hooded robe, bridging the shallow incline of the years brave despair nestled at its core a faint regret weeping willowed tears ___________________________________________ In response to Muse's Poetic Challenge 17. |
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 6/19/2008 3:01 am |
the dictionary helped me in that ... improving my vocabulary  what do they regret? Not allowing the tears run freely?
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6/19/2008 5:03 am |
gosh so poetic  could you put this in layman terms!!!! phew  each day I am progressing I think... from these blogs of yours   Who knows what miracles YOU can achieve, when YOU BELIEVE, somehow YOU WILL ..... YOU WILL WHEN YOU BELIEVE
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6/19/2008 6:32 am |
Can't help wondering who was in the robe and why he/she left the "despair" and "regret" behind. "shallow incline" and "brave despire" sound so charming. I'm always surprised by your ability of putting the least possible words together and presenting the most unexpected and subtle images in front of us. (This is not a compliment.  )Agnes
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6/19/2008 6:42 am |
Vacant hooded robe?? I keep thinking of Dementors now. Maybe a Mini-Dementor, since the despair is the brave sort. I'm dyslexic. I scream Ho Dog instead of Oh God in the throes of passion.
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6/19/2008 7:16 am |
Vacant hooded robe?? I keep thinking of Dementors now. Maybe a Mini-Dementor, since the despair is the brave sort. That Gower is really good with the words. Cheers! 
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 6/19/2008 7:18 am |
Brilliant...so full of meaning and so little words! Just a bit sad! "Never look back, the future is so close!" Angie
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6/19/2008 8:42 am |
Wow! You're really good! I wish I can create a poem like that. Your poem inspired me to create my silly poem to Muse'poetic challenge and it was a disaster. 
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6/19/2008 8:50 am |
I was thinking of Jawas. Then sorta got lost in the whole thing. That Gower is really good with the words. But then maybe that's why he gets more blood flow upwards. I'm dyslexic. I scream Ho Dog instead of Oh God in the throes of passion.
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6/19/2008 9:37 am |
I know! Considering he only has a wee little one, too! But then maybe that's why he gets more blood flow upwards. Cheers!
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6/19/2008 9:40 am |
so you have the muse bug pretty good thanks for reading and as per Dave Allen "May your God go with you"
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6/19/2008 5:11 pm |
hello mister master of words how are you pal ? I think you have a very good control of word thanks for sharing and have a great weekend when it comes thanks for stopping by my friend straight from the heart
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6/20/2008 4:38 am |
the dictionary helped me in that ... improving my vocabulary what do they regret? Not allowing the tears run freely? why you feel that dull ache every time you pass a certain spot or read a certain word.
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6/20/2008 4:43 am |
gosh so poetic could you put this in layman terms!!!! phew each day I am progressing I think... from these blogs of yours Glad you're getting whatever you need from the blog
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6/20/2008 4:51 am |
Can't help wondering who was in the robe and why he/she left the "despair" and "regret" behind. "shallow incline" and "brave despire" sound so charming. I'm always surprised by your ability of putting the least possible words together and presenting the most unexpected and subtle images in front of us. (This is not a compliment. )Put yourself in the robe and tell me what you think.
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6/20/2008 5:03 am |
Vacant hooded robe?? I keep thinking of Dementors now. Maybe a Mini-Dementor, since the despair is the brave sort. You'll have to take your Dementors elsewhere.
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6/20/2008 6:25 am |
I was thinking of Jawas. Then sorta got lost in the whole thing. That Gower is really good with the words. but did he listen to himself? No, he didn't. Just carried on regardless. Dope.
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6/20/2008 6:26 am |
Brilliant...so full of meaning and so little words! Just a bit sad!
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6/20/2008 6:27 am |
Wow! You're really good! I wish I can create a poem like that. Your poem inspired me to create my silly poem to Muse'poetic challenge and it was a disaster. Thanks for visiting
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6/20/2008 6:28 am |
I know! Considering he only has a wee little one, too! But then maybe that's why he gets more blood flow upwards.
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6/20/2008 6:29 am |
Ha ha! So can a man have ... both? As in "all that and brains too" type both? But I think this has been said before.
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6/20/2008 6:30 am |
so you have the muse bug pretty good
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6/20/2008 6:31 am |
hello mister master of words how are you pal ? I think you have a very good control of word thanks for sharing and have a great weekend when it comes thanks for stopping by my friend Have a good weekend there, too.
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6/20/2008 7:46 am |
It ain't all that. But I think this has been said before. Cheers!
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6/20/2008 8:35 am |
Probably. You know what they say about new ideas. I'm sure you know, considering they've said it before.
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6/26/2008 3:18 am |
hmmm, now what word shall I use today... thinking.... ... you can go have a beer if you like.... Oh, got it, Supercraftywordmasterly Skips off to see if I can interest anyone in publishing my new dictionary  Blog Muse2u 
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6/26/2008 6:58 am |
hmmm, now what word shall I use today... thinking.... ... you can go have a beer if you like.... Oh, got it, Supercraftywordmasterly Skips off to see if I can interest anyone in publishing my new dictionary Good word
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7/25/2008 1:28 am |
wer r you? (¯`v´¯) `*.¸.*´ ¸.•´¸.•*¨) ¸.•*¨) (¸.•´ (¸.•´ .•´ ¸¸.•¨¯`•smile and be happy always
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7/25/2008 7:56 am |
here
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