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there was a severe earthquake in my country on May twelfth.i feel sad deeply.We are standing in silent in three days for the people who was dead in the earthquake. I believe that"person was born in disaster, die in happy".So is a country!There was so many disasters in my country this year.However,i'm sure my country will be stronger after this. My English is poor,i expect your advise. |
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 5/19/2008 9:52 am |
I can understand you very well. I do believe China is getting stronger and stronger everyday.
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5/19/2008 1:37 pm |
I agree with Beta..  Alittlethaiangel : (Thanks for all visited and your coments)
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5/19/2008 3:21 pm |
I understand what you are going through and I am really sorry to see the tragedy and the pain that you folks are going through, it really makes me sad here welcome to the blogz and I do hope you can find some level of comfort here  straight from the heart 
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5/19/2008 5:06 pm |
thank you.you are all friendly.
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5/19/2008 10:07 pm |
My deepest concern for you and your country. China will rise again
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5/21/2008 10:54 am |
China is a very large and strong country. Many disasters in my country too. Hurricanes were devasting in 21st century. Earth quakes were devasting in 20th century. Many tornados this year. It never hurts to pray. A HALF CENTURY of history. 50th BIRTHDAY on NOVEMBER 24!!
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5/22/2008 7:11 pm |
I know that China will adjust and grow stronger, but my sympathies are with the families who have lost relatives in the disaster. You asked for help on writing in English, I'll rephrase your blog as I'd write it. There was a severe earthquake in my country on May twelfth. So far no errors except that a sentence should always start with a capital letter I am deeply saddened. Punctuation (period, comma, etc. is always followed by a space except if above the line - "I'll") my Chinese friend used to do the same thing We will be observing a period of silence in three days time, for the people who died in the earthquake. a couple of points, silent is an adjective, and "who were dead" the verb "to be" is very tricky even in the past tense. I believe that "a person born in disaster, will die in happiness". So it is with a country! or I believe that a person that was born in disaster, will die happily. There have been so many disasters in my country this year. For Americans, there's another one to come in November However, I'm sure my country will be stronger after this. My English is poor, I would appreciate your advice. Actually your English is very good, it just takes practice, if my Cantonese/Mandarin was half as good as your English, I'd be very proud of it! Doug
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5/22/2008 11:23 pm |
I appreciate of you,terra. what is your Mandarin?
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5/23/2008 4:38 pm |
Oops, I thought Mandarin was one of the 2 official languages in China, please forgive my ignorance. It shows how little Chinese I know, if I can't even name the language!
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