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6/6/2008 4:19 am |
The Challenge - Just for fun Write a poem incorporating all of the 10 words from the list. The words can be used in any order and may be changed to variations ie - Shop = Shops, Shopping, Shopped. Title your piece as you like. You can post your poem to your own blog, or post it here. If posting to your blog, then please post a reply/message/link on this post, so we can all visit to read. Please do not post the challenge anywhere else. Thanks. Have fun  Muse Poetic Challenge 16 - Word List Maiden, Read, Trace, Serenade, Velvet, Border, Fall, Herald, Wine, Choose Blog Muse2u 
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 6/6/2008 5:26 am |
Have you been reading Shakespeare again?
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6/6/2008 5:59 am |
hee hee, gave the challenge a bit of a theme this time  Shakespeare? Nah, I've banned him from my blog, 'cause he keeps trying to tame my shrew  Blog Muse2u
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6/6/2008 6:33 am |
Okay. As you like it.
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6/6/2008 6:48 am |
I trace her lips, with my fingertips, A velvet gloss of wine. Oh Maiden fair, these locks of hair, A serenade to soon be mine. The herald cheers, my falling tears, A romance still to be read. Words in staggered order,onto bleeding border, Siren in my head. Inspired, Intoxicated, Amused, And now she has to choose.
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6/6/2008 6:49 am |
I suppose a poetry 101 class will help. LOL
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6/6/2008 9:25 am |
I'll just comeback to see the poems...(not good at writing them). "Never look back, the future is so close!" Angie
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 6/6/2008 9:29 am |
I'll think about it. Have never written a poem ... 
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6/6/2008 10:59 am |
Muse's Poetic Challenge #16 the boy fell at the border as the tracer sang a velvet serenade and death read tales to the maiden pouring blood like wine while heralds played a long lament too late, too late the choices all are made
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6/6/2008 1:37 pm |
To my fair Maiden In the fall across the border, Hark the Herald angel sing, This gift to you I bring, I choose to wine and dine, My Maiden of love, While I read to you, a Poetic serenade, Leaving a trace of my loving, Soft touch caressing your, Warm velvet soft skin, With pleasure boiling from within, Like all the flowers, Blooming in spring. You make my heart sing.
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6/6/2008 1:56 pm |
I traced the face of a maidens grace upon my velvet canvas I serenade her with words I chose from poets that I've heard I herald her with words and wine my sanity crosses the border no poet am I for reasons why but it is the truth that I am after. once an oldhoglover, always an oldhoglover!
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6/6/2008 8:36 pm |
Oh can't think (¯`v´¯) `*.¸.*´ ¸.•´¸.•*¨) ¸.•*¨) (¸.•´ (¸.•´ .•´ ¸¸.•¨¯`•smile and be happy always
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6/7/2008 1:14 am |
<<Be back for the challenge
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6/7/2008 4:52 pm |
Her sequestered heart Unkind years follow beauty and grace, A maiden fair, falls stoic and proud. Yearning once again, for love’s sweet serenade. Forever searching for a glimpse, a trace. For the touch she desires and deserves. Elegantly attired in velvet and lace. Awaiting the heralding of her dreams, She dances alone in her own special place. She withdraws, she escapes. Her full story as yet neither written nor read, Her life far from over, her youth all but spent. With breast still as white as new fallen snow Wine covered lips, glistening a shade of merlot. Marching, ever edging closer toward the border of life, Alone. She keeps it all within her, sequestered away. Awaiting her knight, to come set her free. She must soon choose wisely among fools. Or forever dwell in her sequestered heart. Alone Standplatz und liefert
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6/7/2008 4:55 pm |
I want to thank Ari for holding my hand through this one. Otherwise I would have fallen down and hurt myself Bill Standplatz und liefert
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6/8/2008 4:46 am |
I trace her lips, with my fingertips, A velvet gloss of wine. Oh Maiden fair, these locks of hair, A serenade to soon be mine. The herald cheers, my falling tears, A romance still to be read. Words in staggered order,onto bleeding border, Siren in my head. Inspired, Intoxicated, Amused, And now she has to choose. I enjoyed your poem and I like the way you used the word list. Lol, you don't need 101 for poetry, you did great. I'm really pleased you had a try. Thanks for taking part Blog Muse2u
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6/8/2008 4:47 am |
I'll just comeback to see the poems...(not good at writing them). I don't always manage to do these challenges either  Have a great weekend and thanks for visiting Blog Muse2u
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6/8/2008 4:48 am |
I'll think about it. Have never written a poem ... Thanks for dropping by, have a great Sunday Blog Muse2u
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6/8/2008 4:52 am |
Muse's Poetic Challenge #16 the boy fell at the border as the tracer sang a velvet serenade and death read tales to the maiden pouring blood like wine while heralds played a long lament too late, too late the choices all are made lolA sad tale GB, I like the imagery in this one Fantabulous as always Thanks for taking part Blog Muse2u
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6/8/2008 4:54 am |
To my fair Maiden In the fall across the border, Hark the Herald angel sing, This gift to you I bring, I choose to wine and dine, My Maiden of love, While I read to you, a Poetic serenade, Leaving a trace of my loving, Soft touch caressing your, Warm velvet soft skin, With pleasure boiling from within, Like all the flowers, Blooming in spring. You make my heart sing. What a lovely poem, you captured the feeling of romance well I enjoyed the read. I hope all is well with you Enjoy the rest of the weekend Blog Muse2u
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6/8/2008 4:57 am |
I traced the face of a maidens grace upon my velvet canvas I serenade her with words I chose from poets that I've heard I herald her with words and wine my sanity crosses the border no poet am I for reasons why but it is the truth that I am after. I like the sentiment in your poem Daddyo Great use of the word list. Nice to see you take the challenge too. I hope all is well with you this weekend Thanks for visiting and taking the challenge Blog Muse2u
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6/8/2008 4:58 am |
Oh can't think Enjoy the rest of your weekend Blog Muse2u
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6/8/2008 4:59 am |
< I'll look forward to reading Nice to see you post in your blog again And thanks for visiting with me. I hope you've had a great weekend Blog Muse2u
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6/8/2008 5:03 am |
Her sequestered heart Unkind years follow beauty and grace, A maiden fair, falls stoic and proud. Yearning once again, for love’s sweet serenade. Forever searching for a glimpse, a trace. For the touch she desires and deserves. Elegantly attired in velvet and lace. Awaiting the heralding of her dreams, She dances alone in her own special place. She withdraws, she escapes. Her full story as yet neither written nor read, Her life far from over, her youth all but spent. With breast still as white as new fallen snow Wine covered lips, glistening a shade of merlot. Marching, ever edging closer toward the border of life, Alone. She keeps it all within her, sequestered away. Awaiting her knight, to come set her free. She must soon choose wisely among fools. Or forever dwell in her sequestered heart. Alone I like the way you used the word list, it's a heart-felt read. Many thanks for taking part in the challenge I hope you'll take the next one too Blog Muse2u
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6/8/2008 7:09 am |
Hello Musebk2u, Thank you kindly I'm doing the best I can to fight the cold weather we having, it ways heavy on my spasms & a ankle hurting I still manage to enjoy my w-end. The pain and discomfort can be a good sign too, it tells me I'm alive and makes me stronger say`s Wheelzy with a *Smile* I like to believe your w-end is swell, now you have a terrific week Keep smiling & tc  Lubs 2 a friend  xxx
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6/8/2008 10:17 pm |
Ok I'll look forward to reading Nice to see you post in your blog again And thanks for visiting with me. I hope you've had a great weekend I hope your weekend was good too. Wishing you a great week ahead
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6/8/2008 10:18 pm |
Crownless Queen Fair thee gracious maiden thy legendry serenade verse, chosen by thy herald is my cup of wine whence your velvet bed traces my drunken head
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6/10/2008 3:44 am |
Hello Musebk2u, Thank you kindly I'm doing the best I can to fight the cold weather we having, it ways heavy on my spasms & a ankle hurting I still manage to enjoy my w-end. The pain and discomfort can be a good sign too, it tells me I'm alive and makes me stronger say`s Wheelzy with a *Smile* I like to believe your w-end is swell, now you have a terrific week Keep smiling & tc Lubs 2 a friend xxx I can't remember now, are you in the UK? We don't get the best of weather do we, lol. I hope you have a good week Blog Muse2u
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6/10/2008 3:47 am |
Crownless Queen Fair thee gracious maiden thy legendry serenade verse, chosen by thy herald is my cup of wine whence your velvet bed traces my drunken head Ah, that's one reason to stay away from the wine, lol. Good little poem, I like the way you used the words, and the image of your crownless queen Good one.Thanks for taking the challenge Blog Muse2u
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6/10/2008 3:48 am |
I had a nice weekend Muse, thanks. And I love visiting your blog I hope your weekend was good too. Wishing you a great week aheadBlog Muse2u
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6/11/2008 7:30 am |
Hello Muse2u, I,m in South Africa  , wish to be in Australia near the Outback where it never gets real cold. Would like to visit UK one day because thats where my inbred ancestry comes from  Ty you enjoy ur week to Keep smiling
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6/14/2008 8:05 am |
Finally...the madness of work has finished and I feel up to this challenge.... Wishing you happiness Misty
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6/14/2008 8:20 am |
here it is.... When the moon takes her maiden voyage across her chosen path the mad ones serenade her and toast her with velvet wine. They herald her appearance as she rises in the sky and trace her journey to the borders of dawn Wishing you happiness Misty
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6/16/2008 7:44 am |
Hello Muse2u, I,m in South Africa , wish to be in Australia near the Outback where it never gets real cold. Would like to visit UK one day because thats where my inbred ancestry comes from Ty you enjoy ur week to Keep smiling  Makes for a nice change. lol.Blog Muse2u
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6/16/2008 7:46 am |
here it is.... When the moon takes her maiden voyage across her chosen path the mad ones serenade her and toast her with velvet wine. They herald her appearance as she rises in the sky and trace her journey to the borders of dawn Nice to see you take the challenge I'm glad you've got time now Great little poem too. I like the imagery it conjured up. Good use of the word list Many thanks for adding to the challenge poems Blog Muse2u
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6/16/2008 1:11 pm |
Hello Muse2u, Was delighted by your presence so here I Wheels right over to your humble abode/blog thanking you for the wishes you dropped so elegant in mine. May your week treat you with *Kindness, Respect, Happiness & Love*Regards Gavin
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6/17/2008 2:58 am |
Thank you Gavin and back at ya Have a good week Blog Muse2u
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6/22/2008 3:25 am |
Hi Muse, This is my second try to your challenge. I am just trying to see if I have an artist in me. FFinding you..Finding me. Finding LOVE You transversely walked into open woods Velvet eyes gazed on a poignant crawl Silhouetted in translucent bordered clouds Serenaded my lost wounded heart and soul. Signor cry fall in midst of passion Endless traces of sigh of inner devotion Heartfelt emotion angst in absence Set me in awe amazes this maiden. Of great love heralded each day Of love poems softly read away Dianthus chosen offered with bunch of roses In ocean of wine love simply oozes.
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6/26/2008 2:47 am |
Hi Rose I like the sentiment in your poem. I think you did really well with the word list. An interesting read Great to see you take the challenge. thanks for taking part Blog Muse2u
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6/26/2008 6:22 pm |
Herald the new day Fall Next to a Maiden of choice Trace her velvet border With fine wine Let her serenade you in Sighs you dare not read
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6/27/2008 2:15 pm |
Hi Earth Haven't seen you in ages Nice little poem. Good imagery. I think a lot of the guys here are looking for that maiden I enjoyed the read, thanks for taking part Blog Muse2u
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6/27/2008 11:59 pm |
Aw it's too late but I'll be back... Best regards, Clarencio   FlashMedic Everyday is a good day. Are you going to go my way? Just the truth will do.
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6/29/2008 3:37 am |
Aw it's too late but I'll be back... Best regards, Clarencio FlashMedic Blog Muse2u
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7/3/2008 1:03 am |
Late again. lol. SERENADE. Whilst perusing through the Daily HERALD, My eyes FALL upon a map of England, My finger TRACES the county BORDER, Between MAIDEN-HEAD and READ-ING, I CHOOSE to drink my VELVET WINE, Using SERENADE as my heading. 
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7/3/2008 9:43 am |
Lol, thanks for the tour  I've been to Maidenhead and Reading, but I've never stopped for a Serenade hee hee, I like this little poem thanks for taking part, it was a pleasure to read Blog Muse2u
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