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Poetic Challenge # 14
Muse2u 7/31/2007 4:50 am
The Challenge - Just for fun

Write a poem incorporating all of the 10 words from the list.
The words can be used in any order and may be changed to variations ie - Shop = Shops, Shopping, Shopper.

Title your piece as you like.

You can post your poem to your own blog, or post it here.
If posting to your blog, then please post a reply/message/link on this post, so we can all visit to read.

Please do not post the challenge anywhere else. Thanks.

Have fun

Muse

Poetic Challenge 14 - Word List

Cobweb, Foil, Amateur, Slouch, Secret,
Make, Testimony, Drench, Room, Evict


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OzSummerBreeze
2340 posts 

7/31/2007 8:44 pm

HIya Muse

Been hanging out for the next challenge.. ..Here we go;

The frail and tethered cobwebs slouch in the corner of the room as if to hide a secret.
Like drenched testimony offered only to foil.
Amateur in make and design.
Evicted - Silently.

Hope you enjoy it.

Thanks again.. have a great week

"Oz" OzSummerBreeze

Muse2u
2180 posts 

8/1/2007 2:56 am

Great use of the word list Oz. I like what you did with the words
I hope to try out this challenge, but I'll have to wait for inspiration to stike, lol.
Many thanks for taking part. I enjoyed reading your poem

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Bluesax2

8/1/2007 5:50 pm

To make room for a new life,
I pitched my amateur status.

I paid testimonial
to a slouch who tried to foil my plans.

The cobwebs are drenched,
yet they remain intact.

In a secret ceremony,
I evicted myself.

Poetic Challenge # 14 4U Muse2u

Like keys on a ring
we have our own purpose,
yet we are as one.

Muse2u
2180 posts 

8/2/2007 2:55 am

Hi Bob
I like that
Great work with the word list. Thank you for taking part

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toneboney
5749 posts 

8/2/2007 3:58 pm

"The most important part of a poem is the title, to catch attention".
So first my title.....

The SECRET AMATEUR ROOM, MAKE TESTIMONY to DRENCH and EVICT
people who SLOUCH or put a COBWEB in FOIL.

Whoops I’ve done the title... but I’ve no words left to do a poem now!!!
Ah shame... lol
****************************************************************
I couldn't decide what load of rubbish to put here, so sadly you have to suffer both.... SORRY.

Come listen to my SECRET, come enter in my ROOM,
Feel free to SLOUCH around, in here, there is no doom,
MAKE yourself at home, EVICT you! No, it will not be,
DRENCH yourself in happiness, it’s there for you to see,
There is no judgement of you, nor is there a TESTIMONY,
So now, dust away that COBWEB, surely now you’re free,
Love is so very fragile, you can not wrap yourself in FOIL,
I’m just an AMATEUR in life, as you, I was born from the soil.
Tone.

Muse2u
2180 posts 

8/3/2007 3:35 am

Hi Toneboney
ha ha, great title and I really liked the poem, it went in a different direction from the title
Great use of the word list. I hope you enjoyed the challenge. Many thanks for taking part and have a great weekend

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