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6/12/2007 2:36 am |
The Challenge - Just for fun Write a poem incorporating all of the 10 words from the list. The words can be used in any order and may be changed to variations ie - Shop = Shops, Shopping, Shopper. Title your piece as you like. You can post your poem to your own blog, or post it here. If posting to your blog, then please post a reply/message/link on this post, so we can all visit to read. Please do not post the challenge anywhere else. Thanks. Have fun  Muse Poetic Challenge 11 - Word List Society, Brand, Dice, Manage, Trial, Value, Niche, Play, Action, Clear Blog Muse2u 
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6/12/2007 8:03 am |
Understanding I can see the Way You are On the trail I see the value In your brand What action of society Did I choose to Manage your fire? I become you. We rolled the dice We played the game And could Not find a niche Together In my clear Deep water
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6/12/2007 3:00 pm |
Hi EH  I like the poem and think you used the words really well. I felt the sadness at the end. Many thanks for taking part in the challenge. I enjoyed reading Blog Muse2u
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6/12/2007 7:25 pm |
Dear Muse Ahhh my favourite time...challenge time...ahhhhhhhhh The outcome remains unclear Take action! The trial leaves a brand upon you Hidden within the unguarded niche Unable to manage appearances Lack of value given Society blamed Another great challenge.. thanks "Oz" OzSummerBreeze
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6/13/2007 8:57 am |
Hi Oz - Good work again on the word list. You really do these fast, lol. Great little poem too. Love it. Many thanks for taking part Blog Muse2u
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6/13/2007 8:25 pm |
Dear Muse Its funny they come easy as I the words just fit so easily into my life somehow and how I see and feel thanks... Looking forward to the next one "Oz" OzSummerBreeze
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6/14/2007 11:56 am |
Hi Oz, Next challenge not for a few days yet, hope you don't mind the wait Blog Muse2u
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 6/16/2007 2:22 pm |
As a valued member of society Simon had found his niche. Playing golf with the boss on Sundays, Sales manager (for a leading brand of action toys) during the week. But at his trial it became more than clear He led a far from perfect life, Or else why was he found guilty Of dicing his unfortunate wife?
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6/23/2007 11:03 pm |
I know this is suppose to be a poem but again.. I am not a very good poetic so I will tell you another story.. The criminal had a clear niche market that had been bringing him valuable action. Society had branded the man who managed and played dice as a hustler. The trial was short..GUILT !!!! Sol
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6/24/2007 12:10 am |
You must visit A Challenge..A Challenge Sol
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7/11/2007 8:46 am |
As a valued member of society Simon had found his niche. Playing golf with the boss on Sundays, Sales manager (for a leading brand of action toys) during the week. But at his trial it became more than clear He led a far from perfect life, Or else why was he found guilty Of dicing his unfortunate wife?  Smiles. Hee heegreat use of the list. Thanks for taking part. Blog Muse2u
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7/11/2007 8:47 am |
I know this is suppose to be a poem but again.. I am not a very good poetic so I will tell you another story.. The criminal had a clear niche market that had been bringing him valuable action. Society had branded the man who managed and played dice as a hustler. The trial was short..GUILT !!!! Sol I'll try and visit your blog soon and have a look at the challenge Thanks for taking part in this one Blog Muse2u
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7/14/2007 3:03 pm |
Okay...finally catching up on your challenges!! I have missed them--so here's my version...terza rima and influenced by Season Five of Buffy the Vampire Slayer...gad....what a combination... It takes some clarity to see Your actions as anything but a need to seek a niche market of the self. Mercy! There is no value to your managed greed. You roll the dice; you play the game and brand yourself: gloried The minions gather round, bask in your fame and put on trial those who query your right to such fame. you glow, you revel in your private society exclude those who would dare ask Why you create such misery? Wishing you happiness Misty Wishing you happiness Misty
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7/16/2007 2:39 am |
Yay, I love Glory, she is my favourite Buffy mega villian Great work Misty. I really enjoyed reading this one and like what you did with the word list. Many thanks for taking part. Have a great day Blog Muse2u
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