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Muse2u
2/8/2007 4:52 am |
COFFEE MONSTER Like a monster in my coffee cup you take level latitudes beyond my perception. Throwing slimy mud with a talented aim to cover my thoughts like a bandaid. I wonder if you bunk with demons who aid you in disguise? Do they cling to your belt while you bow to the caffine God? You will not tell... But still your smile of arrogance reflects a taunt in a liquid black mirror. Muse2u © 2003 - 2007 _________________________________________________ I think I mentioned in one of my other posts about 10 words challenges. This piece is one of those. I've managed to find the list of words this time, so if anyone wants to have a go, then here they are  The words don't have to be used in the order shown.Have fun challenge #18 coffee, monster, latitude, mud, talent, bandaid, aid, bunk, belt, arrogance Blog Muse2u 
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 2/8/2007 7:35 am |
See my blog for a reply to the challenge (thought I'd spread the word that way) Nice one
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2/8/2007 7:43 am |
Forgive me This arrogance I must boast You see It took some talent To reach this latitude Trudging through mud Listening to bunk Coming to the aid Of a Drunken monster Scratched tightening My belt I need a band aid All of this Achieved Whilst holding A cup Of coffee and Not drinking Or losing A drop 
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2/8/2007 11:00 am |
See my blog for a reply to the challenge (thought I'd spread the word that way) Nice one just been to read your poem  Great Link Here For anyone who wishes to read - Reply to Muse2u Challenge. I hope you enjoyed the challenge. I used to do a lot of those before my Muse skedaddled off to sunnier climes. If nothing else they get the imagination firing. Thanks for taking part. Blog Muse2u
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2/8/2007 11:07 am |
Forgive me This arrogance I must boast You see It took some talent To reach this latitude Trudging through mud Listening to bunk Coming to the aid Of a Drunken monster Scratched tightening My belt I need a band aid All of this Achieved Whilst holding A cup Of coffee and Not drinking Or losing A drop  lol.Loved the read. You did a great job with the words. I hope you enjoyed the challenge and thanks for taking part.Blog Muse2u
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2/8/2007 3:35 pm |
I...never liked coffee. I guess I'm pretty LUCKY!!! A Woman's from the BACK !
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2/8/2007 6:13 pm |
I...never liked coffee. I guess I'm pretty LUCKY!!!
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2/8/2007 6:28 pm |
Ahhhhh here's my response.....hope you like it! What fun!! I stumble toward the mirror from my narrow bunk horns peeking out from under my tousled hair. I gaze at myself in the mirror and run some hot water, pick up the razor to shave last night’s growth of hair. I have a talent for nicking myself and soon there is blood everywhere Bandaids cover many of the scratches. I offer myself some latitude with my arrogance thinking I can shave without waking up and before coffee. I wander to the kitchen and start the magic brewing. My neighbour, a basso profundo Belts out opera Too early in the morning Where oh where is my hearing aid! I drink the coffee, black as night mud and slowly the monster I was subsides and I am human once more. Wishing you happiness Misty
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2/9/2007 2:07 am |
Hi Debutante and Belle Thanks for visiting. I hope you both have a great day. Blog Muse2u
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2/9/2007 2:13 am |
Ahhhhh here's my response.....hope you like it! What fun!! I stumble toward the mirror from my narrow bunk horns peeking out from under my tousled hair. I gaze at myself in the mirror and run some hot water, pick up the razor to shave last night’s growth of hair. I have a talent for nicking myself and soon there is blood everywhere Bandaids cover many of the scratches. I offer myself some latitude with my arrogance thinking I can shave without waking up and before coffee. I wander to the kitchen and start the magic brewing. My neighbour, a basso profundo Belts out opera Too early in the morning Where oh where is my hearing aid! I drink the coffee, black as night mud and slowly the monster I was subsides and I am human once more. I think there is a lesson there for us all. Shaving and Half asleep don't mix, lol. ha ha. I could imagine this poor woman wandering around with all the bandaids stuck on, lol. I enjoyed reading your poem, it made me laugh. You did great with the words. Thanks for taking part Blog Muse2u
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2/9/2007 4:29 am |
Great poems...I'll post mine here too, for ease of reference. Thanks for all your comments on my blog. I believe elaine67 has done one too in honour of her brother. You come round here with Your coffee break arrogance And your bandaid smile, Your belt slung low as a Tropical latitude, leering Like a monster Hanging downside up From hell's top bunk, Oozing mudhut talent With a breezeblock charm. And you say I need Emotional first aid?
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2/9/2007 10:40 am |
I never thought I'd have a collection of Coffee monsters, lol. Thanks for adding yours here too GB Blog Muse2u
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2/9/2007 12:50 pm |
The bandaid on my mouth prevents me from drinking coffee Someone please take it off release my hands,tied with a belt But be cautious my dear friends I could turn into a monster the latitude will free me from chains and shackles I once felt My vulnerable feature's fake, there's arrogance inside but yet I'm talented enough for you to come to aid It's mud that blurs your view created in your own mind If you free me from these chains you'll wake up being afraid You will wish you'd given me whiskey in stead of coffee, black Coffee makes me talkative Whiskey, sleepy and drunk Now the cafeine will do it's job You will have no more rest You will wish you hadn't given me coffee so you could still be dreaming in your bunk gawd....that's the best I can do...
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2/10/2007 2:22 am |
Hi Riny Lol, has someone got you in bondage?  (See Jake for a drink of whiskey  I think he's got a bottle.I like this piece and I'm going to give you coffee so that you keep talking Great work, I like what you did with the list of words. Thanks for taking part. Blog Muse2u
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2/10/2007 3:25 am |
Hehe, it wasn't easy to do this (for a dutch guy who never used words like bunk, didn't even know what it was when I read it first), so it took me some time to work on it, but I enjoyed doing it...allthough I think I lost the rhythm a bit in the end. But an inspiring blog Muse!!!! keep it up!!
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2/10/2007 10:18 am |
Lol, thank you. I'm glad you managed to find the meaning of all the words. I also had the same problem with one word on a previous list compiled by an Australian woman. I couldn't find it in the dictionary either and had to go ask her what it meant. Blog Muse2u
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2/10/2007 2:58 pm |
Ello Muse,Everyone, I guess i will have to try this challenge when im more awake as its late and i'm very sleepy.But I can't wait coz it looks interesting.I loved reading all the poems.LOL chez
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2/11/2007 12:42 pm |
Hello heres my poem Muse: LIFES MUD. If lifes mud was real i'd look like a monster The coffee I slurped earlier keeps me ever stronger I have a talent for perserverance And i'll get rest in the end in my bunk bed in my minds view in the clearance But meanwhile I'll trudge along wearing my band aid My stratagies for success are already made Peoples arrogance wont hold me back i am determined ive got that knack The Latitude of struggles i've overcome Some people are below the belt and some are just dumb People won't need to come to my aid I have a life of experience and im not afraid
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2/11/2007 12:49 pm |
Hi muse Hope you liked my poem i enjoyed doing it.Hope you have some more words for us to try its fun.
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2/12/2007 4:10 am |
Hello Cheryl Great poem. I like that the character of the piece has a positive leaning towards strength and endurance, even if they have been bruised once in a while. It comes through loud and clear. Nice work I'm glad you enjoyed the challenge. I didn't think so many people would give it a go, lol. I guess since people are asking for another one, then I will post a new challenge soon. Nice of you to visit again. Have a great week hugs Muse Blog Muse2u
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6/16/2007 5:54 am |
One coffee to go please All that coffee under the belt, Leads to sleepless knights, Dreams and nightmares, Restless plights. Mud monsters under your bunk, Knowing the longitude and, Latitude not arrogance to say, This is where I’d like not to stay, I now can convey needless to say. Free of band-aids, evidence of hurt, Aid me no further, I’m doing okay, Give me a place free of the dirt, Hurt and dismay, that’s where I’m gone a` stay.
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6/16/2007 6:16 am |
Hello Muse2u Thanks fur the nice comment you posted in me "Blog" that inspired me to send off my poetry to a competition Which I am now a member n semifinalist in the USA & UK's poetry club and my poems will be published soon in USA's "Immortal Verses" and in UK's "Centres of Expression" London's Poetry Devision  I'm pinching myself every daylol Kind regards Thankful onwheels
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6/16/2007 2:29 pm |
Muse2u A new photo ? I liked the other one but this one you look so so every attractive S.
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7/16/2007 2:54 am |
One coffee to go please All that coffee under the belt, Leads to sleepless knights, Dreams and nightmares, Restless plights. Mud monsters under your bunk, Knowing the longitude and, Latitude not arrogance to say, This is where I’d like not to stay, I now can convey needless to say. Free of band-aids, evidence of hurt, Aid me no further, I’m doing okay, Give me a place free of the dirt, Hurt and dismay, that’s where I’m gone a` stay. Well done on your achievement of being published. Long may your success continue. Keep up the good work Blog Muse2u
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7/16/2007 2:55 am |
Muse2u A new photo ? I liked the other one but this one you look so so every attractive S.I hope all is well in your part of the world Have a great day Blog Muse2u
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